I just wish the story had a little more action. The characters matched their descriptions pretty good from the script from what I could tell but the entire story they are sitting in a coffee shop. I really wish I had a chance to draw these creative characters doing something more than just sitting down for the most part. Also in the script there was ALOT to put onto the first page, a lot of backstory. I did what I could and I added some text in there to try and clarify what was going on, I hope you all can understand it. I feel like it should have been a tad more pages, but I tried my best to follow the script. Overall I think it is decent but may new a little confusing to read!
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